Website review: Write Characters, Not Mary Sues | B...

RockStories RockStories discovered this in Writing 17 reviews since Jul 14, 2007
icon tagswriting bethanyharvey.com/blog/posts/2007/07/write-ch...

Thumbs up People who like this website

alana13
Santa Monica
Paknico
Huntington Beach
stephfoster
Poway
infected1211
Chula Vista
normacb1974fiat
Palm Springs
wireclock
California
CRShelton
Santa Cruz
gorgeousnerd
Carson City
thomasacto
Sacramento
momaro
Fairfield

StumbleUpon is the best way to discover great web sites, videos, photos, blogs and more - based on your interests. Everything is submitted and rated by the community. Discover, share and review the best of the web!

Thumbs up Reviews of this website

RockStories discovered 13 months ago
Bethany Harvey describes herself as an aspiring author, but she gives advice and dishes up insights like a pro. Anyone writing fiction should take the time to read this piece...and then start digging through the archives.
fikcio rated 11 months ago
Most of these decalogues bore the fuck out of me. This litany is no exception:
  • Let your protagonist be ugly.
  • Give other characters their own lives.
  • Let your protagonist fuck up.
  • Don't overdo the angst.
  • Your protagonist's skills should be believable.
  • Don't shelter the characters you like.
THANK YOU!
Darque rated 11 months ago
Interesting to note that, following this author's advice, we wouldn't have Harry Potter, James Bond, Indiana Jones, Dirk Pitt, Lara Croft...

But the author still has a good point. As a Storyteller, I've had players come to me with a million bad ideas for characters. The angst-filled, tragic past that produces a brooding hero; the brilliant, perfectly mannered, fencing librarian; all Mary Sue and Gary Stu variations. I liked characters with flaws and normalities - horrible mistakes that they just couldn't bring themselves to live up to, shockingly mundane family lives, whatever it took to get the player to think of the character as a real person, even if the person happens to be undead.

Just don't assume that a "Mary Sue" book can't be interesting, even a great read - there's a reason cliches live long enough to become cliches, and that's because, more often than not, they work.
Mayamoi rated 11 months ago
This is perhaps the best advice I've seen on writing. It shows you how to avoid what I believe is one of the easiest ditches a writer can fall into.
philigran rated 11 months ago
This isn't a tip, this isn't even advice. If your story is a Mary Sue story, you simply have nothing to say. And you probably should give up writing.
sp0ntane0us rated 12 months ago
Good writing tips.
jaloka rated 12 months ago
This advice could be used in the development of whole plots, as well. Mary Sue novel.
askjosh rated 12 months ago
[Writing]the miss Perfect character, is rubbish.
siteinsights rated 12 months ago
Great advice... Worth a read to any aspiring writer.
This page is not affiliated with bethanyharvey.com.