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DoctorMate discovered 2 months ago- "Letters"
by ~adrianneamadeus
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Sometimes I read your letters backwards,
Starting from the period, working my way back to the
Capital letter.
My mind floundered for meaning - then your words floated,
This way and that, fracturing the syntax - thinking this was revenge
For I thought you would say my syntax was sinful.
As your words kept floating I gained other meanings
Until I knew what you meant
Like your kisses, their meaning without a word.
You were a wizard with words, floating words like those
In Chinese poems you read to me as though I were
A priceless jade figure, though it was I who was jaded.
Knowing not Wang Wei, Tu Fu, Li Po, until you were them.
My thoughts often mistook what you said,
Or what you read, or what you would write
But you never judged me I never knew this because
I never let your words float through the fog of syntax --
Beware of technique you said -- in anything, especially words
They'll know soon enough the perfectly frilled sentence
Has no meaning - in this lucid dream you say
There is no syntax for love, either.
--Dr.M
- "Letters"
