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tommy is a 54 year old guy from Des Moines, Iowa, USA


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  • Created Jul 09 2006


    Tokyo Twins

    a serialized online story


    by Tommy Schmitz

    Chapter 5 - Mourning and melodic mystery on Hebi-yama.

    (here is the link to Chapter 4.)


    _______________________________________________________


    Katie and Susan O'Brien and their grandmother, Obá-chan,

    huddled and cuddled around one other

    to absorb, to grieve, to reject as impossible

    the news of their love ones

    missing in Kasmir.




    Obá-chan suggested the girls stay home tomorrow

    away from the uncertainty and chaos

    surely to hound them

    from well meaning friends,

    from media

    from within their own minds.




    They had never missed a day of school before,

    not a single one,

    nor a day of Shintaiso practice,

    and "tomorrow", Katie and Susan said,

    "would not be the first,

    not with National Trials coming next week."




    The girls retired to their room.

    And Katie did some homework

    by the light of an oil lamp

    lit for comfort and for quiet,

    While Susan sat at the piano

    and began to slowly and quietly play

    the very first song

    her father Henry O'Brien

    had taught her at the age of six,

    and her own tears

    broke new ground in her feeling of loss

    compelling more tears as well from Katie.




    And the melody Susan played,

    a lullaby written almost 70 years before

    by her grandfather in Des Moines,

    then passed down to her through her father,

    became the words spoken between sisters

    and these were words enough.




    Yet after some minutes passed by

    came softly some other melody.

    Maybe from the radio in Obá-chan's room?

    The girls looked around and at each other.

    No.

    This melody, measure for measure, playing along,

    harmonizing and weaving through the notes Susan played

    a soft solo sound from some kind of flute,

    came quietly and on key

    through their opened bedroom window

    from the darkness of Hebi-yama

    and into the barely golden glow of their room.




    And these unlikely companion melodies

    coming from some bigger heart of mourning,

    or magic,

    brought the girls to a tiredness and a peace

    that encouraged them

    to the feelings of their own exhaustion

    and to their futons on the floor

    and subtly and sweetly

    to sleep.

    __________________________________________


    Where the national forest begins

    at the O'Brien household property line

    a mere one meter

    from its west brick wall,

    the stranger in Snake Mountain (Hebi-yama)

    whose voice the girls had heard

    that same evening on their way home

    had spent the earlier part of the day

    making a nest

    about 40 meters away

    in a thick and impenetrable thatch of bamboo.




    He cut out a small clearing

    with a machete knife,

    dividing out in stacks

    the solid bamboo stalks, for vectoring

    from those a bit more flexible, for shaping

    from those a lot more flexible, for lashing

    from those brand new, for food.




    The solid bamboo stalks for vectoring

    became foundation and floor and wall

    laid out in pentagon,

    in diameter

    the length of his body

    and half again.




    He then trimmed and cut

    and lined up in ratio

    like making angels in the snow

    a pattern of chords

    from the flexible stalks

    for a geodesic dome.




    Weaving and lashing

    for a few hours more in the afternoon

    a bamboo roof

    of some organic half moon,

    and lashed this unlikely sturdy top

    to the foundation and walls and floor.

    Then sitting back

    with a smile and a sigh

    he welcomed himself warmly

    to home-sweet home.
    chapter 5 - continued.