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Last login: 2 days agoTommy is a 54 year old guy in a relationship from Des Moines, Iowa, USA.

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Here's my recent work, Tokyo Twins, a modernized parable of Buddha, on pdf. Here's the SU chapter map. :: Choose Archive Page
Jul 9, 2006 9:43am

Tokyo Twins

a serialized online story


by Tommy Schmitz

Chapter 5 - Mourning and melodic mystery on Hebi-yama.

(here is the link to Chapter 4.)


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Katie and Susan O'Brien and their grandmother, Obá-chan,

huddled and cuddled around one other

to absorb, to grieve, to reject as impossible

the news of their love ones

missing in Kasmir.




Obá-chan suggested the girls stay home tomorrow

away from the uncertainty and chaos

surely to hound them

from well meaning friends,

from media

from within their own minds.




They had never missed a day of school before,

not a single one,

nor a day of Shintaiso practice,

and "tomorrow", Katie and Susan said,

"would not be the first,

not with National Trials coming next week."




The girls retired to their room.

And Katie did some homework

by the light of an oil lamp

lit for comfort and for quiet,

While Susan sat at the piano

and began to slowly and quietly play

the very first song

her father Henry O'Brien

had taught her at the age of six,

and her own tears

broke new ground in her feeling of loss

compelling more tears as well from Katie.




And the melody Susan played,

a lullaby written almost 70 years before

by her grandfather in Des Moines,

then passed down to her through her father,

became the words spoken between sisters

and these were words enough.




Yet after some minutes passed by

came softly some other melody.

Maybe from the radio in Obá-chan's room?

The girls looked around and at each other.

No.

This melody, measure for measure, playing along,

harmonizing and weaving through the notes Susan played

a soft solo sound from some kind of flute,

came quietly and on key

through their opened bedroom window

from the darkness of Hebi-yama

and into the barely golden glow of their room.




And these unlikely companion melodies

coming from some bigger heart of mourning,

or magic,

brought the girls to a tiredness and a peace

that encouraged them

to the feelings of their own exhaustion

and to their futons on the floor

and subtly and sweetly

to sleep.

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Where the national forest begins

at the O'Brien household property line

a mere one meter

from its west brick wall,

the stranger in Snake Mountain (Hebi-yama)

whose voice the girls had heard

that same evening on their way home

had spent the earlier part of the day

making a nest

about 40 meters away

in a thick and impenetrable thatch of bamboo.




He cut out a small clearing

with a machete knife,

dividing out in stacks

the solid bamboo stalks, for vectoring

from those a bit more flexible, for shaping

from those a lot more flexible, for lashing

from those brand new, for food.




The solid bamboo stalks for vectoring

became foundation and floor and wall

laid out in pentagon,

in diameter

the length of his body

and half again.




He then trimmed and cut

and lined up in ratio

like making angels in the snow

a pattern of chords

from the flexible stalks

for a geodesic dome.




Weaving and lashing

for a few hours more in the afternoon

a bamboo roof

of some organic half moon,

and lashed this unlikely sturdy top

to the foundation and walls and floor.

Then sitting back

with a smile and a sigh

he welcomed himself warmly

to home-sweet home.
chapter 5 - continued.