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  • Created Jun 26 2006



    Tokyo Twins

    an online story


    by Tommy Schmitz

    Chapter 1 -- a bit about the tokyo twins

    (here is the link to the story's introduction on June 21 2006.)

    _______________________________________________


    This is a story of two Japanese girls

    whose names are Katie and Susan O'Brien.

    Sisters.

    Identical twins.

    Fourteen years old.

    Born on New Years Day, 1992,

    the holiest day in the Japanese calander.

    Except these Japanese girls were born

    one pacific ocean and a continent away

    from this Japanese holiday,

    in the middle of a corn field, sort of,

    in the capital city of Iowa.

    No big deal in Des Moines.



    At nine months old,

    in the arms of their parents,

    Henry and Mieko O'Brien,

    and tagging along at a distance

    their three-year-old brother Jack,

    they landed, to live and to grow

    as a traditional Japanese family

    in the dense and dollhouse suburbs

    of Chofu-shi, Tokyo.



    Typical

    Japanese teenage girls.

    (Yes, the word typical does apply here.)

    Good students. Good piano players.

    Good friends between themselves - mainly,

    good friends to many friends they share.

    Way busier than they need to be.

    Without too much complaint.



    It's some basic nature

    alive and inside

    Katie and Susan O'Brien -

    seemingly acquired

    before birth -

    to make serious ways

    of being serious,

    like practicing

    their particular sport

    five hours per day

    six day per week.

    Not counting

    lengthy daily travel times.

    Not counting practices

    performed at home.

    And they have been running this weekly schedule

    for almost three years.



    Serious about their day-to-day lives,

    Regardless of what else is going on,

    merely growing up a kid in Tokyo

    is, by itself,

    rather serious stuff.



    Katie and Susan O'Brien are athletes.

    Nationally ranked rhythmic gymnasts (shintaiso) for their age,

    and naturally shooting for a spot

    on the Japan national team,

    and ultimately the Olympic team.



    Surprisingly capable of practical jokes.

    Not the worn out jokes for twins

    - they find these boring -

    but subtle and devious jokes

    played upon those who would dare

    hurt the feelings or the physics

    of either or both...

    be they family, friend, or foe.



    You'll just have to get to know them and see for yourself.



    You could sum it up this way:

    Katie and Susan O'Brien

    are cute as hell and tough as nails.



    And I suspect they still would be

    whether they were growing up in Tokyo Japan, or

    Des Moines Iowa, or St Petersburg Russia or

    County Cork Ireland, home of their Irish ancestry.



    Perhaps you are thinking,

    (afterall, many do and have,)

    how can they *really* be Japanese

    with names like Katie and Susan O'Brien?



    Their fellow citizens

    from time to time

    continue to raise the issue.



    And here's how they handle it:

    Katie and Susan O'Brien simply don't care.

    They see themselves as Japanese,.



    So, in this land of pucker and bow

    they are somehow able to radiate

    nonchalance

    about: their foreign sounding names.

    about: their place of birth

    about: their no-doubt-about-it

    dark Irish features.



    They seem to wear in-place

    not a smirk so much,

    but a shrug,

    about such matters

    knowing it isn't the Japanese thing to do.



    Ever since Susan got clubbed in the mouth

    with an aluminum baseball bat

    at the age of four

    by an older bully kid at day-care,

    people that know them,

    know this about them:



    Nobody challenges

    what makes them different

    from other Japanese children.



    The girls established their intolerance

    for being singled-out

    early in their lives.

    And they do so still today,

    non-verbally

    for the most part,

    with eye contact

    that is eerily confident for anyone in life,

    let alone for two foreign looking teenage girls

    in a culture that considers

    such aggression with the eyes

    impolite or far worse.



    Besides these few character traits,

    you couldn't tell them apart

    from any other 14 year old Japanese girl.

    Except, oh yeah,

    that dark Irish look about them.

    Or maybe Mediterranean?

    Olive skinned, black hair, huge Castelian black eyes.



    They would yearly travel with their father

    on one of his business trips to the US or to India,

    They are born travelers.

    But they still make faces at each other

    whenever someone presumes

    they are native speakers of Hindi or Spanish

    or Arabic or Greek or French .




    Besides these things mentioned,

    Katie and Susan O'Brien know the rules

    of Japanese life

    and play them to a tee.

    Moreover, in this culture that doesn't recognize

    the "natural" human tendency

    to occasionally make a mistake --

    (besides what has just been discussed above,)

    neither and never do they.

    They don't accept mistakes of themselves,

    nor mistakes of others,

    and they are, at once,

    rather proud of that

    and they are rather frustrated too.


    (Chapter 2 on Wednesday)
    Return to Chapter Map.