I like this piece as it is but it has got a special link. As the person who liked it Justjada is a very special lady in my life. When I was seriously injured in early November 2010 and I was bedridden with multiple broken ribs,contused lungs and broken shoulder girdle with no significant help this lady found me through SU. She was like an angel helping me along, sending me pieces of beautiful music and art works to keep my spirit high. she has not been in SU for 6 months. In her last communications she told me that she had bad pneumonia. And after that she literally vanished.
I would worry for her well being. I hope you are there some where.